how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants

The provided bar graph display how frequently
individuals
in the USA
visit
fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. As can be seen from the given bar graph
people
generally choose to eat once a
week
or once or twice a
month
between 2003 and 2013.
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to
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and never stay
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all years. In 2003, %32 sit on top,
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once or twice a
month
follows that by %30.
People
who selected to
visit
several
times
a
week
and a few
times
a year are by around %17 and %12 which is
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people
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restaurants
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and once or twice a
month
. In 2006,the situation is
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between the years
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individuals
who
visit
fast food restaurants several
times
a
week
and a few
times
a year increased to %20 and %15 while
people
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who
visit
once or twice dropped to 25%.
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to
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week
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fast food consumption
  • Frequency
  • Dining trends
  • Demographic factors
  • Peak periods
  • Downward/upward trend
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Nutritional awareness
  • Economic impact
  • Health implications
  • Convenience foods
  • Eating habits
  • Statistical evidence
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Fluctuation
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