Your friend is celebrating her Birthday soon and has invited you to a party. But you are unable to come because you are going to attend an important meeting that day. Write a letter to your friend and thank her for the invitation; explain why you cannot come; propose to meet on other day;

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Dear
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, How are you doing? I hope you are doing great. By the way, thank you for your invitation
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your birthday,
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recieved
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received
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well. I just letting you know that
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could not come to your birthday party
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weekend. You know, I have been doing some research with my company. And on that day I have to attend an important meeting with my company. I am so sorry that
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can not come to your 25th birthday party.
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, we can hang out the day after. I will book a restaurant and
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a small party for you there as
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compensation, isn't it great?
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will invite your boyfriend to come
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. Again sorry and See you there. can,t wait to meet you yours sincerely Dhani wicaksono
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