Nowadays, many parents are sending their kids abroad to acquire good education. But, if and when these foreign educated students get back to their native country, they find it difficult to adjust themselves to the work life there. What kind of challenges do the people educated overseas face in their own country? What advice would you offer such people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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this
new era, a lot of
family
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choose to
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encourage
their kids to become
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exchange
students
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.
Although
,
this
is an amazing and so productive experience, a lot of them, once return to their home country, present some problems to add their expectation to the new real
work
life there. In my opinion, even if
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in another country gives you
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previous
skills,
this
knoldagement are made for
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the colture
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colture
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culture
and expectation of another place. In fact, the biggest
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to study in one country and
work
in another is to find the differents in routine and
requirement
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between the two
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and try to translate all you learned in a way that can help you to have a great career. To illustrate, the
next
year I would like to go to study in the Netherlands and speaking with a girl that already studies there I found that there is normal
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a lot of team works. On the
countrary
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contrary
in
Italy
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team
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work
is extraordinary, for sure is absolutely not what we can find in a normal Italian student routine.
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,
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big
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and it can
also
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to the
work
world.
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, good advice
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this
case begins as much as possible multitasking:
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able to
work
efficently
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efficiently
as alone as in
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. In conclusion, change is always a challenge as much as
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back to their own origin after a new lifestyle and standards and the best way to survive and have
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success
is
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flexible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • reverse culture shock
  • work ethic
  • communication styles
  • professional networks
  • industry needs
  • market demands
  • qualifications
  • overqualified
  • integration strategies
  • alumni networks
  • innovative practices
  • flexible mindset
  • overseas experience
  • domestic workforce
  • readjustment
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