People are becoming famous with the help of TV programs and internet. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

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Nowadays, it's easy to become famous. we can get famous in an instant just by posting something on the internet and it went viral and so many TV stations will invite you to their program.

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how easily public can be so popular right now, but of

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there are some advantages and disadvantages

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occur because of

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phenomenon. The advantages of these things are society

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need a long process to become a star. people can easily make something through their gadgets and upload

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some social media and people will easily know them by some work they have done. they don't need to do a long process of casting or class like many celebrities used to do. they can make anything anywhere anytime and it's really helpful for many people even those who live in a rural area with so many limitations and it means anyone can become popular. meanwhile, the disadvantages of

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things need to be noticed. because of the easiness that

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around, it means we have

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of competitors. there is a chance with the same thing we do, others can become famous meanwhile you become nothing. through

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phenomenon

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we can

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see that the competition to become famous are so tight. we can become famous in an instant but to keep

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popularity is another hard thing to do. if you can't compete with others, your popularity will

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short

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time. by seeing

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and

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that we can get

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today

, we should be smart enough to use anything around us to help us become famous. we

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need to be

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and creative enough to maintain

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popularity.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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280 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Accessibility
Exposure
Democratization
Recognition
Sponsorships
Endorsements
Ephemeral
Fleeting
Scrutiny
Intrusive
Sensationalism
Viral trends
Content creation
Public eye
Genuine talent

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