Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

How to choose a job has always been the primary concern of people.Nowadays, many graduates have decided to work independently

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phenomenon and its disadvantages. There are many factors for job applicants to

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for others but themselves.

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,inspired by self-made billionaires who are becoming household names thanks to media and the internet, young people are eager to accumulate their fortune .

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. Being self-employed ables you to explore uncharted territory , making your life more challenging and meaningful.

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, my friend give up his teaching position to become a boss, he hated living a mediocre life.

On the other hand

,the demerits of self-employed cannot be ignored.It is not uncommon for fresh graduates to start a business only to avoid the ferce comptation at the workplace.

Consequently

, without sufficient experience in a large company and strong expertise in a specific field, their business ends up in failure.In fact, the cost could be too much so if

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young adult is not financially enough they are stuck in high-interest loans they face extreme stress and pressure. In conclusion, many individuals prefer self-employed rather than work for others. In my view,

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person can choose a job based on personality and capability.