In many countries, the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing why is this happening? What will be effects of it on the family and society.
Nowadays, people follow their unlimited goals by skipping their food with family members as their busy
life style
. I suppose that it has so many drawbacks than Correct your spelling
lifestyle
the
benefits. Write more than 250 words.
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Firstly
, having breakfast or dinner with relatives is a significant part of the day in most of
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Asian
countries and it is a part of their culture and Add an article
the Asian
the
tradition. But, It is dropping out from our daily rituals while affecting Correct article usage
apply
to
our mental and physical health. Change preposition
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Secondly
, as most of
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employees
have to work more than eight hours or night time to Add an article
the employees
fulfill
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fulfil
the
enough wealth for their basic needs, so, it causes to break up the relationships as well as cooperation among the family members. Not only that but Remove the article
apply
also
these restless life style
make a habit of eating junk foods and having quick snacks. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
Moreover
, at present, increasing the
number of isolated people as their lovers, Correct article usage
apply
children
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and children
far
away from them. Add a missing verb
are far
This
reason also
affects to disappear the taking cusines
together. Correct your spelling
cuisine
Nevertheless
, rapid
growing technology Change the word
rapidly
also
a threat Add a missing verb
is also
for
taking meals cooperatively.
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to
On the other hand
, breaking down of eating with families caused to build up so many social promblems
as well as it was harmful Correct your spelling
problems
for
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to
indiviuals
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individuals
also
. As a result
of eating fast food, makes so many health problems such
as diabetes, obesity, gastritis, etc. Furthermore
, human-beings
suffer from mental troubles as Correct your spelling
human beings
the
haven't good connection with relatives as they have their food Correct your spelling
they
indiviually
. Correct your spelling
individually
Specially
, they may be suffered from Replace the word
Especially
longliness
, depression overemotional, etc. The bonds between Correct your spelling
loneliness
community
and the youngsters affect Add an article
the community
widly
and negatively from that as they Correct your spelling
widely
addict
to using Add a missing verb
are addict
navel
technical Correct your spelling
novel
equipments
and live Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
lone
in a foreign country for their higher studies or career. Correct your spelling
alone
Finally
, these difficulties may cause to
increasing cases in Europe countries.
To sum up, I think that trying different types of foods with your Change preposition
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families
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family
help
to Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
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the growth
growth
of family bond, while maintaining Replace the word
grow
the
mental well-being indeed of continuing stressful mind.Correct article usage
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