Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate
whether
a bunch of museums and historical venues mostly attract Change preposition
about whether
travelers
in lieu of inhabitants. Change the spelling
travellers
This
essay is dedicated to the underlying roots, followed by some equivalent far-reaching resolutions to this
dire problem.
Firstly
, we can't deny that historical attractions have become an integral part of everyone's travel. We can easily see that the number of foreigners visiting those places tends to be more understanding than the locals. In my opinion, first
of all
it is because the local Add a comma
,all
people
have been exposed to a lot of historical knowledge from books since childhood and they have little interest in it because history is taught in schools, which is extremely boring. For example
, Vietnamese students will only visit historical sites when organized by the school. Therefore
, this
is the reason why museums and historical venues appeal to travelers
rather than local visitors.
Change the spelling
travellers
Secondly
, while the importance of the underlying roots is widely acknowledged, it is unfair if that
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apply
of
the effective solution is ignored. The government needs to effectively use the media and social networks to promote and introduce more interesting things that few Change preposition
apply
people
know to the local people
. For example
, when the Facebook page of Hoa Lo prison posted detailed images of torture scenes of the war days, including vivid sounds, it attracted many young people
to actively buy tickets to visit any of the prisons. day and night even though people
didn't care about this
place before. Hence
, there is a wide range of solutions in order to attract more local visitors.
To sum up, there are some reasons and solutions with a view to attracting more dweller
adjacent to museums and historical regions to pay a visit there.Fix the agreement mistake
dwellers
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