Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

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There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate
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a bunch of museums and historical venues mostly attract
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in lieu of inhabitants.
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dire problem.
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, we can't deny that historical attractions have become an integral part of everyone's travel. We can easily see that the number of foreigners visiting those places tends to be more understanding than the locals. In my opinion,
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it is because the local
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have been exposed to a lot of historical knowledge from books since childhood and they have little interest in it because history is taught in schools, which is extremely boring.
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, Vietnamese students will only visit historical sites when organized by the school.
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is the reason why museums and historical venues appeal to
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rather than local visitors.
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, while the importance of the underlying roots is widely acknowledged, it is unfair if
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the effective solution is ignored. The government needs to effectively use the media and social networks to promote and introduce more interesting things that few
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know to the local
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, when the Facebook page of Hoa Lo prison posted detailed images of torture scenes of the war days, including vivid sounds, it attracted many young
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to actively buy tickets to visit any of the prisons. day and night even though
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didn't care about
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place before.
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, there is a wide range of solutions in order to attract more local visitors. To sum up, there are some reasons and solutions with a view to attracting more
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adjacent to museums and historical regions to pay a visit there.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Take for granted
  • Economical constraints
  • Routine obligations
  • Programming
  • Cater
  • Engagement
  • Community involvement
  • Personal connection
  • Cultural relevance
  • Discounts
  • Sense of ownership
  • Interactive exhibits
  • Local traditions
  • Field trips
  • Cultural bond
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