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People in many countries spend more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and What effects will it have on them and their families.

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These days an increasing trend of individuals spending time far from their family and hometown
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working or studying.
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with
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some reasons in
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 following. The two main chief reasons are mainly studies and future prospects. In
this
 day and age, the young generation from developing countries is heading to foreign universities
such
 institutes provide flexible and sophisticated courses which can not be availed by living in a home country.
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, more and more
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 take an exam on abroad country. Because
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there
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 a range of opportunities than
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 national states
That is
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 they prefer to study and go ahead
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 far from their hometown and families. Despite having many advantages, there are some drawbacks.
First
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, sending a child for
further
 studies
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overseas is not only challenging for him or his parents
also
. It is not easy
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 them.
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, If a person is married and doing a job across the country, he will not be able to
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 his
childern
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children
 learning crucial skills.
Such
 as social, emotional, cognitive development and moral during their formative years,
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, children will have trouble with
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varied behaviour patterns in the future. In conclusion, people spend most of their past away from their families because of personal reasons which
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 understandable.
However
,
this
 development is causing psychological strain on both.
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