Immagrants should be accepted or not. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation.

The
immigration
Use synonyms
problem
Use synonyms
is influential entire the
world
Use synonyms
that originated from several incidents.
This
Linking Words
is a huge
problem
Use synonyms
for both the side that sends
immigrants
Use synonyms
country and receives
immigrants
Use synonyms
country. If there
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
Use synonyms
Add an article
a problem
the problem
show examples
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
show examples
, that
have
Change the verb form
has
show examples
a
Change the article
an
show examples
effect
to
Change preposition
on
show examples
whole
Change the article
the whole
show examples
world
Use synonyms
, that have to be several consequences
to
Change preposition
for
show examples
the
countries
Use synonyms
which are related to the
problems
Use synonyms
. The bad impacts could be counted as economic, cultural, and global
problems
Use synonyms
. There are several ways to solve the
problem
Use synonyms
that are acceptable and humane. In order to solve the
immigration
Use synonyms
problem
Use synonyms
, we must
first
Linking Words
look at what causes the
problem
Use synonyms
globally. After identifying the
problem
Use synonyms
, we should focus on the consequences of
this
Linking Words
problem
Use synonyms
for the
world
Use synonyms
and specifically for the
countries
Use synonyms
receiving and sending
immigrants
Use synonyms
. After the definition of the
immigration
Use synonyms
problem
Use synonyms
, its causes and consequences, there is only one thing left to do; solve the
problem
Use synonyms
. The
problem
Use synonyms
of
immigrants
Use synonyms
has been an effective
problem
Use synonyms
in the
world
Use synonyms
for centuries and people have been thinking about how to solve
this
Linking Words
problem
Use synonyms
for centuries. The most common method used for
this
Linking Words
for years;
governments'
Add a missing verb
is governments'
show examples
immigration
Use synonyms
laws and bureaus. What governments want to do by using these offices and laws is to keep
immigrants
Use synonyms
in check.
By keeping
Change preposition
Keeping
show examples
immigrants
Use synonyms
under control,
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
show examples
not only ensures the safety of its own citizens
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
but
also
Linking Words
makes
immigrants
Use synonyms
feel that the rules in their own
countries
Use synonyms
are not there and are under control. Undoubtedly, the biggest cause of the migrant
problem
Use synonyms
in the
world
Use synonyms
is wars.
In addition
Linking Words
to wars, other factors that cause migration
problems
Use synonyms
include, economic
crisis
Fix the agreement mistake
crises
show examples
, drought and not being able to find a job in the department. Of course, finding a definitive solution to these
problems
Use synonyms
will not pass beyond a utopian idea.
Although
Linking Words
there is not always a solution that will solve everything completely, there are solutions that will minimize the damage of the
problems
Use synonyms
. As a solution to the
immigration
Use synonyms
problem
Use synonyms
, governments should establish organizations that prevent wars. All over the
world
Use synonyms
,
countries
Use synonyms
must adopt laws to protect
immigrants
Use synonyms
.
In addition
Linking Words
, in order to prevent ghettoization in receiving
countries
Use synonyms
,
immigrants
Use synonyms
should be prevented from settling in one place. To summarize, the
problem
Use synonyms
of migration is a
problem
Use synonyms
that affects the whole
world
Use synonyms
, and in order to solve
this
Linking Words
problem
Use synonyms
, every country in the
world
Use synonyms
should unite and try to prevent the things that cause migration, and
to
Fix the infinitive
apply
show examples
understand what
immigrants
Use synonyms
are going through with a humane attitude, it is necessary to develop empathy and find solutions to their
problems
Use synonyms
.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: