Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There are so many environmental problems nowadays. Loss of some species of

plants

and animal is among the biggest but

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still believe that there are more environmental problems that we should keep our eyes on it. Animals and

plants

were largely affected by

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throughout

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history because people are always consuming them in food, clothes and so many usages. People actually can not live without

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animals

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and

plants

we need them

everyday

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. Some of these species are rare in which if we use

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it will be no more of

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of

animal

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animals

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and

plants

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are following

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issue and some of them are covering the area

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where the group is about to over in order to feed them and keep as many of them alive. Other environmental issues like global warming and air pollution

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much more important and need to gain large focus.

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products from the human daily used instruments and

material

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materials

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need to be replaced by more

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friendly resources like electrical cars

instead

of petrol cars and

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in replace of plastic.

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we can not take full control of these issues as it is global and the whole world has to work on

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to produce rules and solution that can be followed by the whole

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.

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, environmental problems start to get attention from the leading countries and

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just began to take

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and try to

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. To conclude, I believe that air pollution and global warming is much

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than

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the loss

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of animal and

plants

as it

is directly affect

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human health and can cause many diseases.