In many countries, more and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television microwave oven and rice cooker. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
I believe it is both positive and negative development. In my opinion, producing various household goods for communities could make a better society but
also
affect the environment
negatively.
The reason why it could have a positive development on society is that residents are able to have a better quality of life as there are lots of facilities making a convenient way to live. For example
, since microwaves have been designed, individuals could have an easier method and faster time to heat the food they going to eat rather than use pans or other materials to cook for a longer period. In addition
, television could create another entertainment subject for community
, it contains various types of shows or movies to let people choose from, which is very popular for everyone whether they are elders or youth.
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the community
However
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and it
also
cause problems in environment
and creatures. Correct article usage
the environment
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industry
. A substantial amount of waste could Add an article
the industry
also
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for
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environment
and animals if it is not Correct article usage
the environment
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fresh water
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freshwater
for
human society or kills and eats Change preposition
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accidently
.
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accidentally
manufacture
convenient household goods Wrong verb form
manufacturing
is
letting people Change the verb form
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to
have a greater condition to live but if Change the verb form
apply
produce
too many products could cause lots of waste are dealing damage Wrong verb form
producing
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environment
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the environment
are
too much waste that can not Change the verb form
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dispose
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- moreover
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- although
- even though
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