It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information.

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many advantages rather than negative impact if
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in a positive thing. On the one hand, cutting-edge technology makes
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opportunities to know new
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connection
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easier to communicate
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countries. Social media,
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if
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in a wise. Some
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or news
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may be not suitable for some
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as porn
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or hate speech from others which make
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, today many illegal
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provides information but there is
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people
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can manage themselves to get
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era gives many positive impacts rather than negative
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which makes
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can communicate easily and
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easy to other
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Democratize access
  • Instant messaging
  • Real-time conversations
  • Credible sources
  • Misinformation
  • Unverified facts
  • Reputable news outlets
  • Biased opinions
  • Algorithm-driven content
  • Overreliance
  • Traditional methods
  • Search engines
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