Young people are often influenced by their peers. This is called peer group pressure. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

●In our modern life, the majority of adolescents prefer to spend their time with their

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rather

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old Individuals.

This

is called coequal group

pressure

. Because they feel better if they spend more time with

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. From my point of view, there are

disadvantages

and advantages to

peer

pressure

on children.

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it is extremely worthwhile for adolescents ●On the one hand, there are a number of significant benefits of spending

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time with their peers.

First

of all, young individuals who try to compete with their age peers and are influenced by them can get ahead in life.

Peer

pressure

, despite its negative effects on many, motivates few people in their lives.

For example

, students in the same class constantly strive to be ahead of their

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, which can create healthy educational competition.

Therefore

, young people who compete with positive thinking can be effective. ●

On the other hand

, being influenced by others can lead to depressed youth, the results of which are seen every year in suicides and youths engaging in negative activities after becoming disillusioned with themselves. Everyone and everyone is different and

therefore

plays a different role in

this

universe. As Einstein once said, if the ability of a fish is measured by its ability to climb a tree, it may spend its whole life thinking that it is. stupid, so not everyone can excel at everything. Again, coequal

pressure

can lead to depression. ●In conclusion, today's youth are greatly influenced by their peers, which creates

peer

pressure

, which some

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can lead to a healthy competitive environment.

However

, it is clear that the

disadvantages

of

peer

pressure

outweigh the

disadvantages

. To separate our youth from the negative aspects of

this

trend and bring forth a

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young generation, proper

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may be required to turn

disadvantages

into advantages.