Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
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museums
are primarily visited by tourists rather than locals. Use synonyms
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travellers
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so that they can have a better understanding of local cultures and arts. Remove the comma
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travellers
visit
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museums
because they wish to learn new things.
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While
the importance of the underlying reasons is widely acknowledged, it is unfair if that of the far-reaching solution is ignored. The government should Linking Words
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a lot of attention to addressing Verb problem
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grave issue by arranging appeal exhibits or programs at these Linking Words
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, to ignite the attention and interest of the inhabitants and entice them to Linking Words
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these areas, some recreational competitions ought to be arranged. Use synonyms
Moreover
, reduce entrance costs or provide locals with discounted tickets to entice them to Linking Words
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sites
. Use synonyms
Thus
, there are a bunch of ways to entice residents to Linking Words
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museums
.
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To sum up
, there is no doubt that many tourists Linking Words
visit
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museums
throughout the world, but there are numerous ways to draw locals as well.Use synonyms
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