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Many children these days face difficulties to concentrate or pay attention at school. What are the causes of this situation? What could be the possible solutions?

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It is known that a number of kids can not focus or pay attention at school in recent days. There are some reasons to cause
this
problem
 and
also
 different ways to resolve it.
To begin
 with, no one can deny that invention of
internet
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 has caused various difficulties
such
 as spending time on
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 more than
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necessary
 as well as playing online games
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. In fact, it should be considered one
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 most important issues which lead to
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Secondly
, being social on
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 causes cited
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based on online topics. To illustrate, adolescents have a tendency to get friends by using digital platforms and it affects their social capacities adversely. Not only does
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students for being social, but
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 it charms their
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 to games.
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On the other hand
, there are some methods to solve
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 above.
First
 of all, parents should be aware of the importance of the
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 and they ought to direct
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 of their children to different fields
such
 as nature or vary of hobbies.
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all, lecturers
also
 should be
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interested
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 and by
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educational
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 area.
For example
, a program can carry out with families and teachers to back the
childrens
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 to real life by using straightforward
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 like holding picnics.
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relies
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. To sum up, to solve
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 platforms in my opinion, may execute some programs which involve activities in nature.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technological distractions
  • overloaded curriculum
  • nutritional deficiencies
  • sleep deprivation
  • learning disorders
  • stress and anxiety
  • implementation
  • reform
  • promote
  • policy
  • adequate
  • specialized support
  • resources
  • mindfulness
  • meditation
  • time management
  • screen time
  • cognitive function
  • attention span
  • memory retention
  • consistent sleep schedule
  • extracurricular activities
  • academic expectations
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