The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations . to what extend do you agree or disagree?

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we agree or disagree . As we have already mentioned environmental issues are serious and important , but

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The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations . to what extend do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.

In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents, who are choosing to educate children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do the advantages of home education outweigh the disadvantages?

A university education should be free for all students. To what extent do you agree?

News stories on TV and newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Health services are a basic necessity. However, private companies have made them quite costly for ordinary individuals. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh its disadvantages?