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Band 5.5

A friend who is planning to visit you has asked you to describe the most interesting and enjoyable things to do in the community where you currently live. Write an email to your friend, telling them about these things. In your email, Say what these things are Say why they are interesting/enjoyable Suggest what you can do together

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Dear Joy It's been so long since we were in touch but I haven't forgotten the wonderful day we spent together
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 year. I am glad to hear that you have planned to visit my
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. Cologne is a beautiful
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 and lot to explore. The main attraction of the city is the cathedral which is built in the nineteenth century. there are several attractions like the river and the radio tower. The food in the
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 is amazing, and several authentic local restaurants and cafes are here. Another good reason to visit here is the carnival, which is conducting at every five years by the local authority. The well-maintained accommodations are available at affordable prices. in
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 we have some famous clubs and pubs. you can explore all these. I can't wait to see you With love Jennifer
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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