People today are not fit as they were in the past . What are the causes for this ? What can the government do to deal with this isss?

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process, there were taken into consideration parameters, indicated below: Block slope angles; Ore mining cost ($/
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyles
  • modern conveniences
  • physical education
  • sports facilities
  • unhealthy eating habits
  • fast food
  • work-related stress
  • fitness campaigns
  • public participation
  • subsidizing
  • gym memberships
  • health and fitness programs
  • regulations
  • advertising
  • unhealthy food
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