Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. What might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
It is generally accepted that many people decide to do self-business or freelance more than work in
company
Add an article
a company
the company
in
Change preposition
at
this
time. However
, I agree with the statement in the task. I think many graduated student
or Fix the agreement mistake
students
first time
Add a hyphen
first-time
jober
had Correct your spelling
job
confuse
to choose their Change the verb form
confused
first
job. In some
Change preposition
Some
person
made Fix the agreement mistake
people
Correct article usage
the dicision
dicision
to do Correct your spelling
decision
like
that.
To be more precise, many people Change preposition
apply
interest
to find Add a missing verb
are interest
their
hobby or Change the word
a
second
income such
as stock or cryptocurrency trading due to easy
to earn Correct article usage
the easy
benefitial
knowledge from Correct your spelling
beneficial
internet
or social network in Correct article usage
the internet
Correct article usage
the globolization
globolization
era. Correct your spelling
globalization
Moreover
, they will had
Change the verb form
have
idea
to initiate Add an article
the idea
an idea
to do
something when they had good performance in Change the verb form
doing
those skill
and Change the determiner
that skill
those skills
readily
Replace the word
ready
to
increase Fix the infinitive
apply
thier
potential Correct your spelling
their
such
example in full-time
trader or Add an article
the full-time
be
an entrepreneur.
Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, it will be has a
some Remove the article
apply
drawnback
for Correct your spelling
drawback
drawn back
drawbacks
self-emplyed
because they will Correct your spelling
self-employed
taking
more Change the verb form
take
be taking
risk
to handle without Fix the agreement mistake
risks
experianced
. Correct your spelling
experienced
experience
In many
start-up Change preposition
Many
business
had good Change to a plural noun
businesses
profit
and performance but some had not. As from Fix the agreement mistake
profits
statistic
in many economics research Fix the agreement mistake
statistics
had
only 10 Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
of Start-up Change the spelling
per cent
idea
be Fix the agreement mistake
ideas
Add an article
a success
success
. As well as Replace the word
successful
thier
Correct your spelling
their
experiance
might be less than Correct your spelling
experience
Correct pronoun usage
that experianced
experianced
from company jobs. Correct your spelling
experienced
Expecially
in Correct your spelling
Especially
big
Add an article
a big
company
can give many Fix the agreement mistake
companies
case
to Change to a plural noun
cases
learned
be for Wrong verb form
learn
get
a self-employee.
In conclusion, self Change the verb form
getting
employee
Fix the agreement mistake
employees
such
do a
business can earn a lot of Correct article usage
apply
monay
and get to rich person but it will Correct your spelling
money
be has
more risk Change the verb form
have
in
Change preposition
on
Correct article usage
the pararell
pararell
side. If they have good Correct your spelling
parallel
lucky
Replace the word
luck
to get
a Change the verb form
getting
succeed
organization, will Replace the word
successful
be
Unnecessary verb
apply
benefit
Add an article
a benefit
for
Change preposition
apply
thier
life. Correct your spelling
their
the
this
Otherwise
, it will be bad
Correct article usage
a bad
dicission
for their life path too.Correct your spelling
decision
decisions
Submitted by teerapatt.sk on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!