The maps below show an industrial area in town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

The drawings
illustrates
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the changes
of
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Norbiton
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the Norbiton
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industrial area to residential regions in the future. It is obvious that the development will be dominated by public areas and
homeland
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. The majority of
current
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building in the town of Norbiton was for
factoriy
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factory
factories
where
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is located in the middle of
area
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the area
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. There is a
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roundabout
in the centre of
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which does not change in the planned project.
However
, farmland takes
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part from north-west to north-east. So, there is still land to be built in the
futre
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. Contrastingly, all manufacture’s
building
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will be
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reconstructed
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to housing. The upcoming project will build some areas to live
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as
the
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houses,
playground
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,
school
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, shops,
medical
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and medical
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centre
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.
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, the road will be widened to
north
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the north
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which
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conneted
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connected
by the bridge and it will cause the farmland area smaller in the
north-east
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. The bridge will be the connector for people who live
in
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the north side.
Then
, it will be built a new
roundbout
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roundabout
in the south.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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