Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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In recent years, many media providers
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about the ethics and how acceptable advertisements
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, sometimes they use the wrong ways of commercials in their works.
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, in my point of view,I totally agree with
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statement as many content creators create work by rejecting the
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feeling and
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lying to the
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. Regarding unethical and unacceptable advertisements, most content creators create advertisements by concerned only getting a higher rate of selling orders, views , comments and engagements
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of thinking about the
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and customers.
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, some use harsh words that are not polite or unacceptable to promote.
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, one of the games uses the caption that says '
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you can pass
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stage of the game means that you are not autistic.
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,
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word affects some people's feelings a lot.
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, the advertisement makers
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have sponsors may
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lie to the
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. The sponsors of TV shows or channels always have the power of money can design or arrange what they want to say and promote.
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, it brings some effect afterwards.
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, the body cream brand was advertised with a scene that makes people think that they will be whitened after using the product for 3 days but ,in reality,it is not true.
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tends to be an unethical and unacceptable advertisement.
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, some commercials use unethical and unacceptable ways in their work
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as lying to the customer or using a word that harms other
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feeling
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to get engagement. In my opinion, I agree and support enhancing
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society to be a better way.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents your view and the main points you will discuss in the essay.
task achievement
Support your arguments with more specific examples and make sure they are well-developed to demonstrate your point of view.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unethical
  • Unacceptable
  • Deceptive
  • Exaggerated
  • Misleading
  • Manipulation
  • Vulnerable
  • Targeted advertising
  • Perpetuation
  • Societal norms
  • Stereotypes
  • Negative body image
  • Intrusion of privacy
  • Data-driven
  • Over-saturation
  • Desensitization
  • Annoyance
  • Greenwashing
  • Eco-conscious
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