Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. What might be the cases? What could be the disadvantage of being self-employed?

In our century most
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people
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the people
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want to be
freelancer
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freelancers
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, rather than
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an ordinary
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worker
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workers
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. There are many reasons for
this
.
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self-employed
worker
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workers
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high
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salary
inspire many
people
to be
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a freelancer
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freelancer
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freelancers
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.
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is evident that there are some drawbacks of being
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self-employed
worker and I will
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explain
it
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fully in
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paragraphs . At the status quo ,
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the number
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of online workers increasing
day
by
day
. The main reason is
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high
salery
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salary
sales
of freelancers . As we all know living
cost
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costs
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rising
day
by
day
.
Therefore
, many
people
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trying
to work for high
salery
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salary
.
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, there
is
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no
any
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working hours . So , you can work when you want and it
prevides
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provides
flexible working hours . So , you can
spand
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spend
more time with your family , and it allows you to be satisfied with life .
Unfortunataly
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Unfortunately
, being self-employed is not good in
everyway
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every way
.
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are
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also
some drawbacks like lack of teamwork and
comunication
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communication
. Of
course
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this
causes many problems . The main reason is that most
of
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self-employed
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the self-employed
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workes
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workers
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be alone during their working
day
.
Therefore
, they can not
comunicate
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communicate
with others and they face some
dificulities
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difficulties
when they talk with others . Of
course
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this
leads to
comunication
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communication
disorders . In conclusion , self-employed workers may face some
comunication
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communication
problems because of their work .
Althouhg
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Although
, the number of
people
who want to become a freelancer does not decrease because of its
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benefits . DaVLaT BEK
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • autonomy
  • align
  • flexibility
  • work-life balance
  • productivity
  • advancements in technology
  • entrepreneurial spirit
  • financial rewards
  • constraints
  • employee benefits
  • administrative tasks
  • financial instability
  • job insecurity
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