Some people think that it would be better for larger companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages of this proposition outweigh the disadvantages?
Many
people
don't like factories big companies and industrial buildings in their area
. there are good things about it and bad things. To solve this
type of problem we should make both sides satisfied by looking at the advantages and disadvantages.
To start with there is a lot of great stuff to have in the urban space. First making the distance short for the employees that's why most people
prefer there work to be near there neighbourhood. ,secondly
, let the society friendly. the most important thing is that the tall building in other words
skyscrapers make the place more beautiful and modern. But if we moved the buildings to another area
it will make the people
happier and we can use the places of the companies in the urban area
and replace them with things that are more important to the community.
But in every ,problem we must have the bad stuff that ruins this
idea. Factories and companies can make the city overcrowded so many people
can't reach their destination or drop their kids at school. one of the problems
with pollution is that industrial buildings can pollute the air or the soil and that leads to bigger problems
. However
, there's another reason if we moved them to the urban area
that leads to unsatisfied Citizens and can lead to more unsolved problems
. Nevertheless
that it can damage the place it might ruin the comfort zone. As can be seen in many countries if the workplace was far it will make people
have more problems
.
To sum up
I see that the best idea to make both of them relaxed is that we move the building place near the urban area
and not far away. That can help them go to their work faster and in a good mood. in my ,opinion we must give the people
to vote if it is better to move them to another area
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