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The maps below show one part of a small town called Springsby as it is now, and plans for how it might be developed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps show changes small town called spring city, Develop a plan for its future development. At present, we see the city planner that it lacks important facilities for the residents of the
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. The current city plan is as shown, we notice in the northern
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 an
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 of a housing estate, separated from the lake by Park Avenue Street, and the southwestern
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 contains a school. The proposed development plan is to add facilities for the north
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 of Western Road a shopping
center
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 and car parks
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 to the residential
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,
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 and to add car parks near the lake for picnickers, as for the southwestern
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, a bus station will be added
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 to the school , as well as the reconstruction of the southeastern
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 of the intersection of Western Road with Park Avenue by building a shopping
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 and Car parking to serve the residents of the region.
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