The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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many people that with the advancement in E-commerce, the need for going to shop in-store will decline and

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, local retail businesses will shut down.

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, I completely agree with the given assertions and a number of arguments with support my opinion.

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with, online shopping provides convenience to shoppers. To specify, due to advancements in technology, buyers can do shopping online with just 1 click. They can make online purchases sitting at their homes in 'Pajamas' , rather than getting ready to go outside. Another compelling advantage of e-browsing is

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-saving. Computer accessibility saves a lot of

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, which can be easily wasted travelling by getting stuck in traffic. Within fingertips, online order purchases can be done and at the same

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other household chores can be done.

Therefore

,E-business has provided a lot of ease, because of which the need for going to shop in-store will decline significantly.

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but not the least, Online shopping provides variety. By

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I mean, one can match the prices and special offers at other online sights before making a final purchase.

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, If we go to the individual stores, we hardly get a chance to visit every single store and can make comparisons of product quality and prices. All of the above-mentioned reasons encourage e-shopping and at the same

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discourage local vendors to shut down their businesses and turn to online. In conclusion, I reiterate my position by saying that e-shopping provides convenience,

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savings and variety, because of which people like more e-browsing other than going to local stores.