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Some people consider national news as more important while other people think that international news is of more importance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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 considered by a lot of members of the population more relevant than global ones. On the others side, seconds are considered more useful for others. In
this
 essay, I will try to describe both ideas considering that nowadays all countries are connected for business, social, security, economic, religious or organisational reasons. In my opinion, both
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points of view are legit and understandable but it is
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 true that these days everyone must care about international events because of globalization and
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 because from those may
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 the internal ones.
Nonetheless
, give or find out solutions for worldwide problems is impossible but remain important know them to maintain or to create the best situation in our small city or nation.
This
 is the reason why I am convinced that
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 what is going on around the world is the base
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 not
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 a victim. At the same time, do not take any type of interest
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 what specifically happened near to you is completely wrong. Even if the internal news could be more boring than the international ones, the firsts can give you more
pratical
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practical
 information as a close street, city social events
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 which you can take part,
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 of danger, ... .
Hence
, be informed about
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 situation could help you and
also
 gives the possibility to become a direct part of your community. To conclude, referring to
this
 type of information is always wrong to do a sort of selection about which are the most
importants
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important
 because each new has a different and specific purpose. As shown in
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International reportage gives us the possibility to think about how to protect and
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improve our country while the Nationals are more useful in things like routine and hobbies.
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