Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matter(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their wishes. other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

It is

Correct pronoun usage

Is

show examples

claimed by several people that allowing

children

Use synonyms

to make their own choices on daily matters

is

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

mostly

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

Use synonyms

results

Wrong verb form

result

show examples

in a

society

Use synonyms

of

individuals

Use synonyms

who only think about their own wishes, while some populations believe that it is important for

children

Use synonyms

to make

decisions

Use synonyms

about facts that affect them. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the

second

Linking Words

opinion and would like to highlight various advantages and drawbacks of encouraging the importance for

children

Use synonyms

to make

decisions

Use synonyms

about daily matters. I agree because of the below major reasons.

Firstly

Linking Words

, studies on

children

Use synonyms

show that it is key of being

individuals

Use synonyms

who

has

Change the verb form

have

show examples

a

Remove the article

apply

show examples

confidence in solving problems, could able to fast-moving

decision

Use synonyms

, it starts from their childhood education and family history.

In addition

Linking Words

,if

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

individuals

Use synonyms

start to give

decisions

Use synonyms

at the beginning of their life, they can easily face to impacts and

results

Use synonyms

of their

decisions

Use synonyms

.

For instance

Linking Words

, if the child decided to go

kindergarten

Change preposition

to kindergarten

show examples

in a summer dress in the winter time, parents can explain

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the situation of weather and dress contrast but they would

also

Linking Words

add that the

decision

Use synonyms

will be the

child's

Change the noun form

children

child

show examples

. When the child leaves

from

Change preposition

apply

show examples

home and

feel

Change the verb form

feels

show examples

cold, he/she understands how he should profit about the experience about his/her parent's experience. Otherside, if the family would insist on their

decision

Use synonyms

, the kid would never face to

results

Use synonyms

of his/her

decision

Use synonyms

and he would never experience

about

Change preposition

apply

show examples

that. There are many young

individuals

Use synonyms

in

society

Use synonyms

who doesn't face

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

any result of their

decisions

Use synonyms

and fall down even if there is a small problem.

On the other hand

Linking Words

, I believe

in

Change preposition

apply

show examples

also

Linking Words

that allowing

children

Use synonyms

to make their own choices on every issue, has some effects on a

society

Use synonyms

of

individuals

Use synonyms

who only think about their own wishes but

this

Linking Words

is not the only reason for

this

Linking Words

. Parent has an important role in

this

Linking Words

part because families ought to educate their

children

Use synonyms

how

Change preposition

on how

show examples

to respect our environment and others when they give

our

Correct pronoun usage

their

show examples

decisions

Use synonyms

. To give our

decisions

Use synonyms

will be some

results

Use synonyms

and

this

Linking Words

result has to be respectful

and

Correct word choice

apply

show examples

should consider we are not

only

Correct article usage

the only

show examples

one

Correct pronoun usage

ones

show examples

in

this

Linking Words

world. Individual needs to belong the

society

Use synonyms

and

society

Use synonyms

has its own rules

by

Change preposition

apply

show examples

laws and value judgements. In conclusion, I would like to firmly agree with the idea of

children

Use synonyms

making their own

decisions

Use synonyms

about daily matters to start a life earlier and

society

Use synonyms

should respect them since they are

future

Correct article usage

the future

show examples

of our community by

also

Linking Words

teaching them how to make

decisions

Use synonyms

inside of

society

Use synonyms

and respect

other

Fix the agreement mistake

others

show examples

alive.