concern for the environment is growing and more and more people are choosing to recycle.But some people suggest that recycling is not enough.They believe we need to consume less.

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The day is increasing and more
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are gathering. There is no
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garbage is not an alternative way. We must lessen our
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things
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worthless substance.
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have to use various
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of items. They
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of materials. As a consequence, there must be a chance
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substances.
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are not aware and a lot of
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things
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harmful effects on
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nature
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could be reduced.
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nature
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adequately it can create a lot of harmful
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, some individuals consider recycling should be increased for the development of
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is collapsed by the side effect of partial
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nature
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is becoming worse. It is going very tough situation as there is no option for others. In
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most materials need to be shrunk.
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are needed to survive. But if it is not reserved it can be spoiled.
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think
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should be consumed. It can be controlled in
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various
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materials should be resized.
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there is a possibility of destruction if there is no alternative system of reducing worthless substances. I am in my opinion, recycling should be removed.

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