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Some people think that sense of competition in children should be encouraged.other believe that children who are taught to coperate rather than compete become more useful adults .discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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A section of society believes that
competition
 in pupils should be spurred, while others opine that
youngster
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 should learn how to
work
 together
instead
 of competing because it is beneficial later in life. I agree with
this
 latter because coordination is important in every stage of life. And I'm going to discuss both views and opinion On the one hand, those who believe that
competition
 must be spurred because it will serve as a motivation to children. They opine that pupils aim their studies as a main motto due to hard compete in school and learn hard for flying colours.
For instance
, in ,Delhi public school each class is awarded a prize
to
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 being
first
 in class, and after that rule is implemented children more concentrate on hard
work
 and enhance their education to win the award.
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since
competition
 makes a successful life .
On the other hand
, i and other schools trust that working in a team will be a beneficial opportunity for those who grow and build their social skills . As well as it creates
a
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inner confidence for their future interviews. Whereas a rise of the student
to
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build
the
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communication skills and
they
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go through new ideas able to learn and experience for different
team
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work
 which leads towards social abilities because
they
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 able to accept each other views as they
work
 together.
In addition
, pupils learn to be noticed by how they help their colleagues. In conclusion, some people
believes
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 that
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sense of
competition
 should be encouraged because it boosts the confidence of children to study. Whereas other says that cooperation is important to
work
 smart because it improves
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idea, and thinking and provide lots of knowledge
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