Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #attention

There is a contention between

people

who think that advertising is super successful in assuring

people

to purchase and those who consider it as helpless and we

do not

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longer pay attention to it

due to

its frequency.

This

essay will discuss the statements and answer why I think that advertisements have a positive impact. First of all, in my opinion, advertising is actually really helpful in getting buyers. It can make a product known and ensure

people

that the product has good quality.

However

, the advertisement has to be well-contented and has to have rhymed supportive audio.

For instance

, if the text of the audio has a rhythm and slogan,

then

by hearing it, the repetitive sound of it will stuck in minds unconsciously.

That is

why I consider advertisements helpful.

Secondly

, if the product

will be

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advertised by a celebrity,

people

will instantly recognise

them

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and the next time they

will

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see it in a grocery store, they will already be persuaded by its quality.

For example

, everyone knows *head and shoulders* shampoo only because one of the best football players showed up in its advertisement.

However

, advertisements can

also

be very annoying. If the content

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is dull and just describes the product’s advantages,

then

people

will not pay attention to a poor advertisement like that. But still, I do not think that the reason why adverts are not useful is their frequency.

Instead

, I suppose that it is

due to

its content. In conclusion, I would say that the content and occurrence of a famous person can majorly and positively impact

people

’s minds.

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1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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268 words

4.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
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overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
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