Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

#people #attention

There is a contention between

people

who think that advertising is super successful in assuring

people

to purchase and those who consider it as helpless and we

do not

Verb problem

show examples

longer pay attention to it

due to

its frequency.

This

essay will discuss the statements and answer why I think that advertisements have a positive impact. First of all, in my opinion, advertising is actually really helpful in getting buyers. It can make a product known and ensure

people

that the product has good quality.

However

, the advertisement has to be well-contented and has to have rhymed supportive audio.

For instance

, if the text of the audio has a rhythm and slogan,

then

by hearing it, the repetitive sound of it will stuck in minds unconsciously.

That is

why I consider advertisements helpful.

Secondly

, if the product

will be

Wrong verb form

show examples

advertised by a celebrity,

people

will instantly recognise

them

Correct pronoun usage

show examples

and the next time they

will

Verb problem

apply

show examples

see it in a grocery store, they will already be persuaded by its quality.

For example

, everyone knows *head and shoulders* shampoo only because one of the best football players showed up in its advertisement.

However

, advertisements can

also

be very annoying. If the content

Change preposition

apply

show examples

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

is dull and just describes the product’s advantages,

then

people

will not pay attention to a poor advertisement like that. But still, I do not think that the reason why adverts are not useful is their frequency.

Instead

, I suppose that it is

due to

its content. In conclusion, I would say that the content and occurrence of a famous person can majorly and positively impact

people

’s minds.

Submitted by kasymzhomartsultan on Wed Jan 11 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

task response

Ensure that your essay clearly addresses the prompt and provides a well-structured response. Use appropriate examples and explanations to support your points.

coherence and cohesion

Work on creating a clearer and more cohesive introduction and conclusion. Make sure to thoroughly introduce and summarize your main points.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

10Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

268 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

persuade
promote
attract
influence
impact
consumerism
commercialism
market
product
brand
endorsement
manipulative
saturated
overwhelmed
repetitive
distracting
irrelevant
exaggerated
misleading
desensitized

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
Today, more and more people want things instantly (e.g.: goods, service, news). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?
In the contemporary epoch, numerous people desire that things should be completed immediately without wasting moment. This essay will suggest that the primary reason for this is the busy schedule of individuals. It is a negative development because people are becoming overly impatient.
<4
band
More and more people are using mobile phones and the internet to communicate so people are losing the ability to have face-to-face conversations, to what extent do you agree or disagree?
People do not communicate face-to-face, therefore, there is lack of depth in communication. People only exchange normal greetings via online communication. They do not share their personal feelings and sorrows. So, the bond which needs to be developed between people is not growing. A person has a lot of online friends, however, he actually does not have anyone to share his true feelings. For example, if someone is depressed or suicidal, he cannot not share it online communication with his friends, because he only shares greetings with them.
5.5
band
Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only those subjects that they find interesting and they are best at. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
In the contemporary era, the existence of advertising has crept into many aspects of daily life. From my perspective, this tendency has raised many disruptive concerns relating to the issues of manipulating public opinion and fostering overshopping.
6
band
Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Do you agree or disagree?
Due to state-of-the-art technologies, remote jobs have become prevalent in recent times. Some may argue this offers many advantages just to clerks rather than employers. I strongly disagree with the statement, and in my opinion, that method is beneficial for both sides.
4.5
band
Some people think that sports are important for personal development, while others believe that they are just a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People often hold varied views about sport's impact on an individual's holistic development both in its favour and opposition. In my opinion, games play a vital role in the growth of people as it helps to maintain the body and one can build a career as well in this field.

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Today, more and more people want things instantly (e.g.: goods, service, news). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

More and more people are using mobile phones and the internet to communicate so people are losing the ability to have face-to-face conversations, to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe teenagers should focus on all subjects equally, whereas other people think that they should concentrate on only those subjects that they find interesting and they are best at. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that sports are important for personal development, while others believe that they are just a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion