world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

It is undeniable that
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is booming around the globe
from
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the
last
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few decades. Being so,
people
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are buying more and more vehicles for various needs which
create
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creates
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unnecessary
traffic
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in the
city
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. There are some significant reasons
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why I think
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statement is true.
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, owning a
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not
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only
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symbol but
it
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is
also
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a necessity for most
people
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in many metropolitan cities.
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,
the
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basic need
such
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as commuting to
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work, dropping children
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at
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the
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school,
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and travelling
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to distinct places force
people
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to purchase
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a car
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car
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cars
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to
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up
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with fast-paced life.
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, vehicles play a vital role in everyone’s life
although
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it affects the
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system
of
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in
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the
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a
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big
city
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like London.
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, London is
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a congested
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city
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with narrow roads and
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, a greater number of cars leads a massive
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jam
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jams
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all time during the peak hours. To curtail
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issues, the government should adopt favourable strategies to demotivate
people
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from keeping cars.
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,
government
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the government
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could develop a strong transportation facility with higher frequency and cheaper tickets so that
people
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can easily rely on it for day-to-day travel and not buy a
car
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. To cite an example, Amsterdam has the
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best transportation facility and
hence
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the majority of the
people
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take advantage of it.
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, the
city
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is completely free from
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traffic
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issues.
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, the fuel rates should be surged by the authority which
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in
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turn force
people
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to utilize
train
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trains
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. To conclude, using
a
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of
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car
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has been increasing over decades and a
traffic
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jam problem in many cities
although
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the appropriate measures
are
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taken by the government can reduce these issues and can lead
a
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to a
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congestion free
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congestion-free
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environment for the citizens.

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