In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantage
It is undeniable that there are many
fast
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fast-food
food
restaurants available all over the world. Although
it has a positive side, there are also
several drawbacks that should be taken into account.
To begin
with, the benefit is that it helps the
homeless people. Since it is cheaper and can be found everywhere, everyone can afford it, especially those who are economically Correct article usage
apply
under-privilaged
. In Correct your spelling
underprivileged
other word
, homeless people do not need to worry about being hungry because they cannot afford Change the wording
another word
other words
food
that day. For instance
, when they are starving, they just go to a place like McDonald
and have Change noun form
McDonald's
some
meal since it is less costly and available on every side of the city.
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On the other hand
, there are several downsides when this
junk food
is inexpensive and rampant. Firstly
, it can increase the consumption of unhealthy food
. As it is low cost, the community will tend to keep buying it, in
which Change preposition
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this
can lead the society to have issues with their health, Correct pronoun usage
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such
as suffering from diabetes, heart attack, obesity, and food
poisoning. Additionally
, the low price of fast food
and its high availability in a certain region could have an adverse impact on local economic growth. When there are too many fast food
restaurants with very cheap prices, besides
people will always buy at that place, MSMEs will also
lose a place or location in building their business because of the availability of so few locations.
In conclusion, even though having fast food
with
cheaper Change preposition
at
price
and its availability has several upsides, there Fix the agreement mistake
prices
are
still Change the verb form
is
significant
negative Add an article
the significant
impact
of that. Given Fix the agreement mistake
impacts
this
situation, the government should pass regulations to regulate this
fairly so that it would not continue to damage the
society.Correct article usage
apply
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