In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantage

It is undeniable that there are many
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food
restaurants available all over the world.
Although
it has a positive side, there are
also
several drawbacks that should be taken into account.
To begin
with, the benefit is that it helps
the
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homeless people. Since it is cheaper and can be found everywhere, everyone can afford it, especially those who are economically
under-privilaged
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underprivileged
. In
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, homeless people do not need to worry about being hungry because they cannot afford
food
that day.
For instance
, when they are starving, they just go to a place like
McDonald
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and have
some
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meal since it is less costly and available on every side of the city.
On the other hand
, there are several downsides when
this
junk
food
is inexpensive and rampant.
Firstly
, it can increase the consumption of unhealthy
food
. As it is low cost, the community will tend to keep buying it,
in
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which
this
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can lead the society to have issues with their health,
such
as suffering from diabetes, heart attack, obesity, and
food
poisoning.
Additionally
, the low price of fast
food
and its high availability in a certain region could have an adverse impact on local economic growth. When there are too many fast
food
restaurants with very cheap prices,
besides
people will always buy at that place, MSMEs will
also
lose a place or location in building their business because of the availability of so few locations. In conclusion, even though having fast
food
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cheaper
price
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and its availability has several upsides, there
are
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still
significant
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negative
impact
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of that. Given
this
situation, the government should pass regulations to regulate
this
fairly so that it would not continue to damage
the
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society.
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