In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

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digital era, there has been an increase
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availability
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the availability
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of fast
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and it becomes more economical for
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in some countries. I hold a firm belief that
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trend may have both positive and negative
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in equal measure. In
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side of Reducing
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and widening the
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of fast
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, it will allow
people
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to save far more time and try different kinds of
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.
People
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will be more attracted
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cheaper and tasty
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, and most of them probably fancy ordering fast
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instead
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of cooking.
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, individuals, especially in a metropolitan city, can save
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time and enjoy their
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practically.
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, it helps the merchandise to promote their products. There are ubiquitously fast
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exists today, and the selling of
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will be more competitive. In
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way, reducing the price and serving more variety of
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, can
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to promote the
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the merchant
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merchant
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. In another hand, rampant cheaper fast
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in some countries can lead
people
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to reduce their
skill
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skills
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in cooking.
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, a mother back in the day taught her daughter how to make homemade
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but now, most mothers are indulged by ordering fast
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and they may not teach their
daughter
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for preparing
food
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.
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,
people
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will forget the sense of cooking and preparing
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with their family. In the past cooking together was a tradition for bonding one family member to others but nowadays they are having lack
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this
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sense which is becoming less and less. In conclusion, making fast
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becoming cheap and various has some benefits which are
people
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can effectively save their time and try various
kind
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of
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. It is
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can be a promotion for some
merchant
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.
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, in
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of
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side of
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case,
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trend can reduce
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the skill
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of cooking and
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feel
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the feel
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of cooking together with
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