Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many
people
like doing the same
things
. It is because you don't have to change many
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about your
life
. Some
people
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like doing
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and looking for way more
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aspect
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of
life
. I will explain my point of view on
this
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. In our
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we spent almost 8 hours a day
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work even in some
people
spent more than that. That
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our job
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in
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working the same
things
for the rest of
life
or said routine work in some cases. Some
people
like their job
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new problems every day so
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they love changing. it is not wrong that most
people
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the
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time in
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zone so they don't adapt or try to
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any
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things
that much but I see
this
kind of
life
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boring. Your brain will
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slighly
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slightly
regressive and dead in the end
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because
it is not
develope
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develop
developed
.
In contrast
, the brain of a group of
people
like change
will
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get
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development
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learning progress in
everyday
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the everyday
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we found. Another point is
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is the way you find yourself. If you spent your time doing the same old
things
everyday
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how
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now
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that you know that what you
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done
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is what you want to
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.
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Life
is about trying new
things
. Maybe you can find a new hobby from what you try once. I encourage everyone to try new
things
and except
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because
this
world is changing
everyday
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if we don't
adaping
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adapting
we
wil
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will
not
ready
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be ready
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to live among
new
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generation in
this
world and that will be hard for your
life
.
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