Sending criminals to prison is not the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them do you agree or disagree?
For
my perspective sending Change preposition
From
criminals
to jail
is the best idea but law
should have proper evidence that Correct article usage
the law
criminal
is guilty and Correct article usage
a criminal
their
should not treat Replace the word
there
criminals
extremely harshly like mental and physical torture and their
should give proper Replace the word
there
facility
to Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
criminals
like basic needs.
Firstly
the law
should held
responsible Change the verb form
hold
for
Change preposition
apply
criminals
families Change noun form
criminals'
criminal's
their
should care for the families. Replace the word
there
Criminals
should get proper jail
or proper food and their
should be given Replace the word
there
place
neat and tidy. Correct article usage
a place
Criminals
should get good
education while staying in Add an article
a good
jail
and the
Correct article usage
apply
criminals
should be given very
good Add an article
the very
job
if Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
their
have completed their education in Correct pronoun usage
they
jail
.
For
instance
if Add a comma
,instance
criminal
is guilty Add an article
the criminal
a criminal
for
rape, murder etc if Change preposition
of
evidence
is exactly true the criminal should get Add an article
the evidence
death
penalty. Add an article
the death
For
example
in Add a comma
,example
india
many Change the capitalization
India
mla
sons proven guilty will get properCorrect your spelling
MLA
facility
like good food, clothes all necessary activities etc Common Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
criminal
always get ignored by Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
law
. Add an article
the law
Their
should Replace the word
There
be threaten
Change the verb form
be threatened
be threatening
same
way.
Let's elaborate many Correct article usage
the same
criminal
only do Change to a plural noun
criminals
odd
Add an article
the odd
job
in Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
jail
like their cook food clean
Replace the word
cleaning
toilet
cut Fix the agreement mistake
toilets
woods
. Fix the agreement mistake
wood
For
my Change preposition
In
view
Add a comma
,view
i
completely agree with Change the capitalization
I
this
statement. Sometime
the government Correct your spelling
Sometimes
law
should allow criminal
to get fresh air and should allow Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
Correct pronoun usage
them to
to meet
Change the verb form
meeting
the
family. If Change the word
their
criminal
Fix the agreement mistake
criminals
having
small kids and wife Wrong verb form
have
law
should help their family members. In many cases criminals
kids stop going to school and do odd jobs for family needs. kids get bullied by their classmates for their father
Fix the agreement mistake
fathers
wrong doing
.Correct your spelling
wrongdoing
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