Cutting down forests is a real environmental threat, yet, this is still happening at a great rate around the world. Why do you think forests are being destroyed? Are there any benefits from the destruction of forests?

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Topic Vocabulary:

deforestation
agricultural expansion
commercial logging
urban sprawl
climate change
economic activity
infrastructure projects
sustainable development
environmental degradation
renewable resources
biodiversity loss
ecosystems
habitat destruction
conservation efforts
carbon footprint
afforestation
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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.