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Some people get into debt by buying they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent from having this problem?

#people #debt #don’t #can’t #behavior #action
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 the number of films per year, that
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 in 3 different formats ( VHS, DVD AND Blu-ray), that a particular shop was leasing and selling between the years 2002 and 2011. Overall, we can see that in
this
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 the rentals have been decreasing slightly from more than 200.000 to more or less 50.000 by 2010,
also
, the most popular kind of format in the
transcations
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transactions
 has been the DVD format with its peak in 2007 by approximately 200.000
sales
. According to the
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the
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VHS
sales
was
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 the best sold in 2002 with more than 50.000
sales
 per year but since there just
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started to
decrase
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decrease
decreased
 significantly since
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0 in 2004. On the one hand, we can see that
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Blu-Ray
sales
 started to be
fomous
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famous
 in 2007 and since there has been growing gradually by 2011 with 10.000
sales
.
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