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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in team, while other people think that take part in individual sports is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The pie chart provides the factors of how the production of farming land decreased around the globe.While, supplied table illustrates the causes of land degradation in North America,Europe and the Oceanic during the 1990s. Overall, in the pie ,chart all parts are contributing but over-grazing is the major one.
On the other hand
, it is obvious from the chart Europe had more unproductive land as compared to other regions in the mentioned time.
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 with, overgrazing is top of the list with high proportion.The main reason seems there the presence of livestock.
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, the rate of deforestation is accounted for 30% due to less rate of grown trees.The ratio of over-cultivation is over the high quarter.
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, the contribution of other problems is not up to mark. Alternatively, In the three mentioned countries, Europe was top of the list with a significantly high percentage in every field.
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, Oceanic had entire control over over-cultivation and faced unnoticeable deforestation.
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