You recently recived a letter from a friends asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Writing a letter to this friend. Hn your letter . say why he/sshe would not enjoy going to college . explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her . suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Sam, I hope you're doing well. How are aunt and uncle? I hope they are
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fine and like to see all of you. Because I didn't see your family since I left your home. Anyway, I received a letter from you yesterday. As per the
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letter you asked my advice regarding some urgent matter. So I'm writing
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letter to give you some of my opinions.
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of all, I'd like to remind you that our educational background. Because you did not study well in high school. You are good with social work and sports. That’s why I suggest that the better option is doing work. Because when you find Job now, as soon as you can go top of the level in your carrier life.
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, when you choose to study I think you can't go through it.
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, I would suggest that you can find a chef Job it's suitable for you. Because you have a talent for cooking delicious food. Due to that reason, someday you can be an executive chef. Well, that’s all for now. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Harsha
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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