Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The education system has two options to offer if somebody wants to attend

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school

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of them is a private

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and the other is a public one, which is usually

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common choice for most

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people. In

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option we are not required to pay any fees,

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because the government is funding

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an institution. In contrary, in private once each student

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to pay every

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. So if the non-public

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are

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receiving

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from the kids, why the authorities are still giving them

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essay will discuss that issue.

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should

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of all, there are main reasons why I believe that

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heads of state should stop throwing away cash.

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money

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imporant

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important

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in order to buy new books, desks or new computer devices.

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with lack of funds is unfortunately normal

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because

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is not able to

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possess

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new source of income just like that. Complete

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different

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is in non-public

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, where

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of the building has

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to spend ten more times

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or even more than that.

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a huge amount of

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is from student tuition. From my experience, when I used to be a student

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both

schools

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four years I

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spent in private primary

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and the rest 4 years in the public one. And, I can say that

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educational

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one, but I have to admit that It was

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nocitable

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noticeable

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that there was a problem with funding.

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is why

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I assume that the government should be more focused

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of public

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. In conclusion, it is good to have a choice, especially when it comes to education.

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, it is

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wonderful

, that kids from every kind of

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home have a chance and possibility to learn something new.

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is why I believe that the government should stop or limit the amount of

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sending them.

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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Nowadays, people move from one country to another for work. Some people think children of these families suffer because of this, while others think it is helpful for them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodworking should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family. To that extent do you agree or disagree?

You recently received a letter from your freind asking for an advice to go to a college or to find a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to your freind, In your letter include why he would not enjoy goin to college. why getting a job is good. suggest few good jobs for him

Nowadays people use bicycles less as a form of transport. Why is this the case? What can we do to encourage people to use bicycles more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.