Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house

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Dear Sam, I hope you'll find it

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letter. I heard from your father you're going to be moving to a new

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which you brought recently. I'd like to wish you congratulations because

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you're dream came true. As you know

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year

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we moved to our new

home

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. So we required many helpers to carry our furniture. I am lucky because many of my friends help me a lot to do that. So I believe you

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need more helpers because these days labour costs are too high.

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I'm happy to help you to move to your new

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. So you can save some money because I'll bring some of my friends to help to carry the furniture.

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, I think you will need a big lorry to carry all the household items. So I can borrow a vehicle from my uncle.

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do not worry to find a vehicle. So tell me about your new

home

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? as per your father it is an apartment. I heard it has a big pool. ,

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tell me how many rooms does

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have in

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apartment? I'd like to stay a couple of days in you are new

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. That's all from me. I look forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Harsha.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

216 words

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Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Nowadays, older people who need employment have to compete with younger people. What problems does this cause? And what are the solutions?

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Some people think that one of the ways to solve environmental problems is to increase price of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree