Your friend is about to move into a new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to help him/her to move explain how exactly you can help ask him/her some questions about the new house

Dear Sam, I hope you'll find it
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this
letter. I heard from your father you're going to be moving to a new
home
which you brought recently. I'd like to wish you congratulations because
finally
you're dream came true. As you know
last
year
also
we moved to our new
home
. So we required many helpers to carry our furniture. I am lucky because many of my friends help me a lot to do that. So I believe you
also
need more helpers because these days labour costs are too high.
Then
I'm happy to help you to move to your new
home
. So you can save some money because I'll bring some of my friends to help to carry the furniture.
Also
, I think you will need a big lorry to carry all the household items. So I can borrow a vehicle from my uncle.
Then
do not worry to find a vehicle. So tell me about your new
home
? as per your father it is an apartment. I heard it has a big pool. ,
also
tell me how many rooms does
this
have in
this
apartment? I'd like to stay a couple of days in you are new
home
. That's all from me. I look forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Harsha.
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