People from cities go to university more often than those who live in the country. Some people think that the government should make it easier to enter universities for people who live outside of cities and towns by setting lower entry requirements and tuition fees. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
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Education is an important thing that everyone must have. For people who are from the
country
it is much easier than those who lived there but have Add a comma
,country
different
Add an article
a different
nationality
. Does the government has to solve Fix the agreement mistake
nationalities
this
issue by facilitating the requirement and providing fees for them?.
In my Change the punctuation
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opinion
I think every citizen in the Add a comma
,opinion
country
has to get the chance if he is welling
to learn.
Some of the immigrants who are living in Correct your spelling
willing
the
countries Correct your spelling
these
they
have Correct pronoun usage
apply
large
passion and motivation to learn because they know that their chances are lesser than those who have the nationality, Correct article usage
a large
therefore
they focused on improving their skills more than others. However
, I think the government should provide for
them Change preposition
apply
motivational
offers like free education or special discounts for excellent students. the students who are talented from foreign countries because after their graduation they will help the community and the Change preposition
with motivational
country
development and growth.
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country's
On the other hand
, some people believe that if the
foreigners take the local Correct article usage
apply
citizen
places there will be Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
less
chances to get a job and to build Change the quantifier
fewer
business
. Add an article
a business
the business
Furthermore
, the competition will be harder and this
is some issues come
with that Correct pronoun usage
that come
for instance
, some of them will leave the country
if they bring the degree that they want. However
, the immigrants are usually came
to the area Change the verb form
are usually coming
that
they feel better Correct word choice
where
for
their future and often they Change preposition
about
planed
to stay for Correct your spelling
planned
long
time. I believe that you have to give the chance Change the article
a long
for
all and the government should support those who deserve Change preposition
to
because
they will help to improve the Correct pronoun usage
it because
country
.
To sum up, countries should support the education of the
foreigners by facilitating the study requirement. Correct article usage
apply
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Bachelor's
Bachelor
degree should be the minimum degree for most of the Correct article usage
A bachelor
country
Change noun form
country's
citizen
which will absolutely help to move it forward.Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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