Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages?

Some people think that it is better to
work
long hours to earn more money and ignore that they do not have enough time to enjoy their
life
. I consider
that
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demerits of
this
situation clearly more than
merits
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as it makes our
life
stressful. There are some advantages of long working.
First
of all, people can earn
enormous
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fortune by working
day
and night. It is believed by many that working more will fetch us
significant
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amount of fortune.
For example
, Steve jobs used to
work
for more
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hours a
day
, which made in a billionaire and successful person.
Moreover
,
this
helps us in achieving our professional goals. Everyone has a dream to achieve something in
life
and these dreams can be fulfilled only if you do hard
work
to achieve them. According to me, even though working
day
and night may give us money, there
are
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serious negative
impact
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which
this
creates on our health, which cannot be ignored.
On the other hand
, working more and ignoring leisure activities have several disadvantages.
Firstly
, hard
work
without any enjoyment makes our
life
stressful. Due to less time spent on recreational activities, our level of stress increases and cause us several mental illnesses.
For example
, as per
study
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of
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Delhi university, those who
work
more than 8 hours a
day
and do not have time for enjoyment activities are more prone to depression and anxiety.
Secondly
, it is detrimental to our
body
in addition
to
mind
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.
Human
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body
has its limitation and working more than our limits can cause serious damage to our
body
and may result in
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the problem
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problem
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problems
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of obesity and severe diseases.
Finally
, it can affect our family relationships. Working
day
and night can harm our relationships with friends and family seriously.
Therefore
, I believe that too much
work
and lack of enjoyment can seriously impact our physique and bring more worry in our
life
To conclude,
although
there are
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a benefit
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benefit
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benefits
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in form of success and enormous fortune in case we
work
hard and ignore everything, there are serious damages which it can cause to our mind and
body
which cannot be repaired. I recommend that we should maintain
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between both
the
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things in order to have
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a jubilant
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and healthy
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • stress relief
  • productivity
  • economic growth
  • career progression
  • skill enhancement
  • quality time
  • financial security
  • leisure activities
  • physical health
  • personal relationships
  • stress-related illnesses
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