Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages?
Some people think that it is better to
work
long hours to earn more money and ignore that they do not have enough time to enjoy their life
. I consider that
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this
situation clearly more than merits
as it makes our Correct article usage
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life
stressful.
There are some advantages of long working. First
of all, people can earn enormous
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an enormous
day
and night. It is believed by many that working more will fetch us significant
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, Steve jobs used to work
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than 12
day
, which made in a billionaire and successful person. Moreover
, this
helps us in achieving our professional goals. Everyone has a dream to achieve something in life
and these dreams can be fulfilled only if you do hard work
to achieve them. According to me, even though working day
and night may give us money, there are
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impacts
this
creates on our health, which cannot be ignored.
On the other hand
, working more and ignoring leisure activities have several disadvantages. Firstly
, hard work
without any enjoyment makes our life
stressful. Due to less time spent on recreational activities, our level of stress increases and cause us several mental illnesses. For example
, as per study
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of
Delhi university, those who Change preposition
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work
more than 8 hours a day
and do not have time for enjoyment activities are more prone to depression and anxiety. Secondly
, it is detrimental to our body
in addition
to mind
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body
has its limitation and working more than our limits can cause serious damage to our body
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problems
Finally
, it can affect our family relationships. Working day
and night can harm our relationships with friends and family seriously. Therefore
, I believe that too much work
and lack of enjoyment can seriously impact our physique and bring more worry in our life
To conclude, although
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benefits
work
hard and ignore everything, there are serious damages which it can cause to our mind and body
which cannot be repaired. I recommend that we should maintain balance
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