Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some today contend that medical professionals should take charge of guiding

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health sufferers. In my opinion, doctors have other prior responsibilities than only giving

advice

to

patients

. To start with my opinion , hospital practitioners have to give immediate treatment to their clients

first

rather than talking about

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healthy guidelines . Sometimes, some situations are extremely serious and demand

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instant attention

by

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medical

man

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such

as road accidents or heart attacks . Another reason is that professionals even guide

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patients

about

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developing healthy eating styles.

However

, individuals are not following it properly in their daily

routine

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routines

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.

For example

, doctors restrict

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patients

to avoid drinking alcohol but beer habitual people are not able to leave

this

anymore .

Moreover

, people have to take care

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themselves rather than relying on

doctor's

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doctors'

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advice

. Many people are suffering from

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of diseases nowadays because of their unhealthy

lifestyle

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lifestyles

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. If they commence to give emphasis

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their health and take appropriate precautions

then

they will get well soon.

For example

, my father suffered from higher blood pressure . Fortunately, he was able to overcome it by changing their eating patterns .

Therefore

,

a good

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good advice

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advice

also

need

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a good listeners

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. In conclusion,

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the doctor

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doctor

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doctors

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should give

advice

about a healthy lifestyle to their

patients

in order to prevent the onset of diseases. In

this

way , doctors can faithfully

fulfill

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their

hippocratic

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oaths .