Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and human experience whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources

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is now facing huge environmental issues, climate change and the disappearing of flora and fauna around the globe is an alarming

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that must be solved. Unfortunately, the main

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are human beings, we took over the

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industrialization and haunting

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the cause why the

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suffering like no other time.

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some changes in order to improve the life of the animals and increase their population again.

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some people believe the responsibility to make changes must be put on big companies and corporations, the reality is that every individual human can help to minimise the impact of humans over the

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, with simple actions like recycling.

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simple action allows bottles and cans to be

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, reducing the production of

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plastic material, which is harmful and incredibly poisonous for the earth,

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material can take up to 200 years,

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can result in

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the environment. It is an undeniable fact that most efforts should

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on the big companies, these are responsible for most of the pollution produced worldwide,

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a solution might fine with a considerably high amount of money to those companies whose factories produce

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of polluted substances. To sum up, high environmental issues are a reality and we as the main culprit of these problems face the responsibility to make the proper changes in our way of living to optimise the life of animals and plants of our

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, as well as reduce greenhouses gases and increase the number of fauna.