Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many may argue that traversing and
job
are the only factors which
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people
to learn
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. Others think that there are various reasons to know another
language
. While both travelling and occupation are the main reasons to learn
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, I believe that there are some other purposes
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. Due to globalization, some
people
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about the aim of learning foreign languages based on their experiences. Traversing is increasing more and more, the reason
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which
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people
tend to speak in
foreign
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language
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.
For example
, I have known many individuals who went to
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to be taught the English
language
because of
touristic
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goals.
In addition
, a large number of
job
seekers could be seen every day in all parts of developed countries, who
are received
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their documents in an international
language
such
as English or Germany, resulting in
this
belief by many that travelling and finding a
job
opportunity are the only goal of learning
second
languages.
However
, many
people
consider other causes for
this
issue
such
as academic and international business purposes. Nowadays, many professors and researchers require to know about the latest publication which
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conducted by foreign academic persons.
For instance
, I collected and read
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English papers in my
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period.
Furthermore
, all international businesses need to be provided with the
language
of their customers.
Therefore
, I completely disagree with
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opinion that traversing and finding a
job
are the only aims for learning
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language
. In conclusion, there are a variety of causes
that
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people
tend to know foreign languages, whereas
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and working aspects are the most important reasons.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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