Some people prefer to have their meals from food stands and restaurants while others prefer home-cooked meals. What is your preference.
It is true that the difference between social and homemade foods has been discussed. Many individuals like to take dinner at
restaurants
and other people prefer to have a meal at home with handmade meals
. I personally believe that the benefits of handmade foods far outweigh their drawbacks. These benefits are twofold. This
essay will illustrate why I choose this
side.I will discuss its disadvantages sides and benefits.
First
of all, it is undisputable fact that restaurants
have brought significant changes to our modern life. For instance
, you can taste new types of meals
from all parts of the world that you don't know how to make them. Moreover
, you have a chance to celebrate certain occasions like birthday parties or wedding ceremonies with inimitable dishes. And it is incontestable fact that restaurants
can provide you with unforgettable times, especially birthday parties. You can take a room that is
well-decorated for your ceremonies.
Some citizens like tame meals
. Also
, I like handmade aliments. Because, while cooking nourishments, you are provided with a lot of emotions and experience. For instance
, during this
prosses,you will be in a better mood and you can spend your time in a productive and memorable way. What's more, you can make sure that your meal is full of nutrients and natural products.
By way of my conclusion, I once reaffirm my position that in this
modern century,humans visit eating stands and restaurants
to eat meals
with great value and attractive taste. But, others prefer homemade meals
because they are sure that it has the best quality and it is full of vitaminsSubmitted by asqar4997 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite