People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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The world's population is increasing daily and more and more
people
are moving toward metropolitan
areas
from rural regions
as a result
many
people
living in
cities
face problems.
Hence
, if the authorities and leaders support the
people
to
move
to rural
areas
half of the problems will be solved. The following essay will elaborate
further
on the aforementioned points with examples. Nowadays, we can see the
cities
are getting more crowded because developed
areas
got more opportunities rather than regional towns and
people
living in these
areas
are facing numerous
issues
daily.
Firstly
, heavy traffic jams during the rush hours because
instead
of using public transport today each individual use their own vehicle to
move
5 minutes distance as well.
Secondly
, the harmful gases emitted by vehicles makes air pollutant, and many
people
face respiratory
issues
. As an example, individuals who are living in flats in the heart of the city are unable to breathe fresh air since all the harmful gases produced by vehicles are followed throughout the buildings.
On the other hand
, since the housing complexes are compact
people
find there is not enough space to
move
around. Governments build up housing schemes where 50 families can live on one block since there is not enough space to build houses in a vast area.
On the contrary
, authorities can provide a solution to
people
by encouraging them to
move
to rural
cities
where
people
will not have to face
issues
.
Besides
, if the leaders make new job opportunities and make the rural area as luxurious as
cities
individuals will eventually
move
.
Moreover
, executives can sell land for cheap prices, and
people
will buy their own land and build houses according to their preferences. As an example, in Singapore rural
areas
are developed the same as the countryside where
people
enjoy both
areas
.
Furthermore
, helping
people
to use public transport by reducing ticket prices and giving subsidies. In conclusion, with the developing world,
cities
are rapidly expanding in every sector where
people
are facing
issues
such
as air pollution, and housing
issues
.
Therefore
, the government can introduce
people
to rural
areas
which are developed with various opportunities so that individuals living in
cities
are willing to reside in the countryside.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban congestion
  • traffic jams
  • lengthy commutes
  • high cost of living
  • financial strain
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • quality of life
  • green space
  • recreational areas
  • social isolation
  • fast-paced lifestyle
  • public services strain
  • overpopulation
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