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Some people believe that women should be able to join their country's army and police forces. Others think that only men should be allowed to work in these areas. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, society
think
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 that
women
 can
also
 attend
in
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an
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 army as well as police
departman
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department
departments
 since so many people start to want gender equality
for
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 everything.
However
, others believe that those are the works which
men
 can only
work
. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both
of
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the
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views and give a logical conclusion. On the one hand,
women
's participation in those jobs
have
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 some beneficial effects.
To begin
 with, job opportunities for females will increase.
For instance
, in the modern world, girls can only
work
 in some companies and most of the time they get less salary than their male workmates. If the government let
women
work
 in
army
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 and police forces, they can prove themselves and
finally
 get a good salary.
Consequently
, females' wages will increase all over the world and
the
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single ones will live easier without a husband.
On the other hand
,
this
 trend has
some
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certain cons, too.
First
 of all, only
men
 have been working in those professions for many years.
Therefore
, males are the only ones who can do
aforementioned
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 jobs professionally.
Men
 gained a lot of
experiences
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experience
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 in the past years since they have seen plenty of wars as well as crimes. Even in the evolution theory, we can see that boys' psychology as well as bodies are formed for those careers and they are able to do them better than
women
.
As a result
, owing to males' special features and experience, it is better to leave these jobs for
men
. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that it can be really useful for
women
's future life and career;
nonetheless
, it is very dangerous to give those
work
 to
women
 as it is risky and some humans die because of it. In my opinion, only
men
 must keep doing those things as in the past because it is less risky than trying new things.
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