Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to broadcast foreign films and TV shows. Others, however, think it is best to produce local films and shows. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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shows
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those
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apply
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hasIt
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affected
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apply
firm
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firms
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vary
competitors in Replace the word
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, many international movies or show with we called "Big Film Cinema" are extreamly
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extremely
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with
foreign
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a foreign
nation
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nationals
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many fans around the Correct subject-verb agreement
has
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with the owner can produce Correct article usage
a varaity
varaity
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variety
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with
same
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the same
content
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which
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which
called
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is called
"Marvel
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the "Marvel
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compare
with others in Change the form of the verb
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people
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follow
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this
universe some
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apply
are improve
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improve
expecially
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especially
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will make Add an article
the company
thier
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their
movie
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regions
also
, they will make them with global traditional such
as well-know
festivals and at the same time they can expose Correct your spelling
well-known
thier
custom to globalize. Correct your spelling
their
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, citizen in many others can learn their traditional
too.
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traditions
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the other hand, when Change preposition
On
people
like to watch and follow international content
more than local. It really impacts to
local firms Change preposition
apply
in
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apply
the
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a
strongly
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strong
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, local firm Replace the word
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have enough fund to improve their Change the verb form
doesn't
content
to match with
customer need and it Change preposition
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make
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makes
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the local
company
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companies
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apply
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apply
the
modern Correct article usage
apply
needed
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needs
in
currently Change preposition
apply
the
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movie
watcher have many choice
to choose and if they won't develop it will make Change to a plural noun
choices
a
drawback to them.
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the
conclusion, Correct article usage
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a customer
the customer
customer
from around the Fix the agreement mistake
customers
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have
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has
choice
to choose more than Change to a plural noun
choices
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a movie
movie
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movies
from
international or local. It will be having from any social or entertainment platform. Some Change preposition
apply
people
don't like to watch long
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a long
the long
movie
but like only short Fix the agreement mistake
movies
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customers
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