Some people think that it is good for a country’s culture to broadcast foreign films and TV shows. Others, however, think it is best to produce local films and shows. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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any entertainment around the
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technology.
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local entertainment
firm
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competitors in
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.
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content
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"Marvel
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Universe". It can
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industry. The benefit for
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expecially
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especially
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will make
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their
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. And
also
, they will make them with global traditional
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festivals and at the same time they can expose
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their
custom to globalize.
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the other hand, when
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way.
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, local firm
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have enough fund to improve their
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customer need and it
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some boring too. In my point of view, I think
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adapt their story to match
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modern
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because
in
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currently
the
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movie
watcher have many
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to choose and if they won't develop it will make
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drawback to them.
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conclusion,
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customer
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many
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to choose more than
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movie
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international or local. It will be having from any social or entertainment platform. Some
people
don't like to watch
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movie
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movies
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but like only short
content
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to
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develop their
content
to match with
customer
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customers
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required to make a survival.
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